Review: Tributary by Lisa T. Bergren

Tributary by Lisa T. BergrenTitle: Tributary
Series: River of Time, #3.2
Author: Lisa T. Bergren
Publisher: Self Published
ASIN: B008A36RVK
Tags: Young Adult, Romance, Time Travel, Historical
Hearts: ♥ ♥

TRIBUTARY, picks up a year after BOURNE… Lia struggles to overcome the fear that constant battle has heaped upon her; Gabi and Marcello face an unexpected crisis; and Lord Greco just may be ready to leave the grief and loss of his past behind him, so that he might grab hold of the future…

Review

It’s a year after the last war against Firenze. Lia, her sister Gabi, Marcello, Luca and lord Greco are riding through the forest. Suddenly a horse and its rider come charging at them. Luca and lord Greco act immediately. However, they are too late to see that it’s not an attack, but a hunter hunting a boar. And a girl at that. A girl who falls from her horse because of the manoeuvre lord Greco performed and hits her head on a stone.

Hastily, they take the girl to the castle. Once there, they find out that she’s from Firenze. She has to be returned to her father soon, otherwise there will be another war. To prevent that from happening, Marcello promises to return the girl in a couple of days, when she has recovered completely. But nobody knows if the girl will ever wake again and what the damage is to her head…

And another heart less. I was so thrilled after reading the first book in this series, Waterfall. But as the series continues, the excitement becomes less and less. Every story has the same concept. It feels like a copy of the one before. At the beginning, you couldn’t really see this, but it becomes more clear as the series goes on. In short: something happens that needs the attention or help of the she-wolves ad there are some skirmishes. Most of the time only the enemy is injured or dies during those clashes. The good guys don’t even get a scratch, miraculously! And even in the direst situation, it’s still a given that everyone gets saved, at the last moment. This is toooo predictable for me. I know that what I just wrote is standard material in most books nowadays, but it doesn’t bother me when it’s written in such a way that I won’t notice it. And as the River of Time series continues, I can’t help but notice it. It makes the story less thrilling and undoes the magical tale that was spun in Waterfall.

I was also not a fan of Ali and how she behaved. Okay, she’s a typical Medieval gal, but to treat people who have been nothing but nice for you in such a way? I know it’s not something I’m capable off. Therefore she had only herself to blame for the consequences. But only a bit, since they were way worse than the crime she committed. And the way her feelings changed were a bit too sudden. Okay, you could see it coming, but still, it was tooo sudden. Same goes for lord Greco…..

The only thing that was a bit interesting was Lia, and only at the beginning. She’s gotten a trauma because of all the people she had to kill during the war and now she finds it hard to touch a bow. She also has homesickness, which I can quite understand, given everything that happened. How Lia digests all of it, was written well. Although the ending of this process was, once again, quite sudden. It seemed like she went from processing to “cured” in a matter of minutes. I’d preferred if it was a bit more slowly, with more processing of how she felt and at least her telling somebody else about her feelings. Sometimes you’re just not able to cope alone. And this is one of those times. Otherwise, what are shrinks for?

Conclusion

2 HEARTS. Despite the predictability, it was still a nice read. I’ll just think of this book as a very long epilogue, after Torrent. It gives you more insight of how everyone is faring and if they did get a happy ending. Although some parts were a little too sweet for my taste and I had a hard time connecting and liking Ali, one of the main characters in this story.

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River of Time Series

  1. Waterfall
  2. Cascade
  3. Torrent
  4. Deluge (Not Yet Published)
  • Bourne (Book 3.1)
  • Tributary (Book 3.2)

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